<nonpony><original> To The Skies (The Wings Of Angels)

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<nonpony><original> To The Skies (The Wings Of Angels)

Postby Obrum » 27 Sep 2012 14:58

Haven't put anything out in a while, so I've been working on this for the past few days, let me know what you think!

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Re: <nonpony><original> To The Skies (The Wings Of Angels)

Postby Twy » 27 Sep 2012 17:00

My only real problem with the track is that it's a bit on the repetitive side. There's some variation of the main melody after the 2:30 ish mark, but it feels pretty much the same throughout the song.

Other than that, though, I thought it was rather good!
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Re: <nonpony><original> To The Skies (The Wings Of Angels)

Postby Obrum » 27 Sep 2012 17:14

Twy wrote:My only real problem with the track is that it's a bit on the repetitive side. There's some variation of the main melody after the 2:30 ish mark, but it feels pretty much the same throughout the song.

Other than that, though, I thought it was rather good!


Thanks :3

And yeah, I'm well aware that I need to work on reducing the repetitiveness, just not too sure how. Whenever I try changing things up, I can never seem to make it flow properly, and when I add something new in it tends to get pushed into the background. So yeah, need to work on that.
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Postby Twy » 27 Sep 2012 17:38

Obrum wrote:
Thanks :3

And yeah, I'm well aware that I need to work on reducing the repetitiveness, just not too sure how. Whenever I try changing things up, I can never seem to make it flow properly, and when I add something new in it tends to get pushed into the background. So yeah, need to work on that.


You're quite welcome! I've also enjoyed your other works that I've heard, for the record.

I know exactly how you feel on that one, I think. That used to be the single most difficult thing about writing music for me. I'd have one really cool loop that I really liked, but I'd just end up staring at it like... "what do I do now?"

Like you said, getting one part of the song to flow into the other without being too jarring or sounding too different but also sounding different enough... It's tough. At least, for me it is. I wish I had any advice on how to get around that, but sadly I am quite the scrub when it comes to the music-ing. Sorry I can't be more helpful.
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