<pony> <original> Derp (minimal house)

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<pony> <original> Derp (minimal house)

Postby Metabrony » 23 Sep 2012 17:55



a song dedicated to Derpy. this is my first minimal house track so feedback is definitely welcome.
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Re: <pony> <original> Derp (minimal house)

Postby colortwelve » 23 Sep 2012 18:30

The interlude that starts at 1:30 sounds a little dissonant when you have that happy lead going along with the melancholy piano in the background... They both sound great on their own, but I don't think they should be playing together.

That said, this is still a really fun song, and you definitely managed to pull off a minimal track without getting boring, so this is a really nice first shot at the style! :D
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Re: <pony> <original> Derp (minimal house)

Postby vladnuke » 23 Sep 2012 19:07

Agreed, that synth just doesn't mesh with that piano in general. Maybe if you put the synth on the same key as the paino and double-timed it, it would be cool, have arps go as the piano plays chords.
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Re: <pony> <original> Derp (minimal house)

Postby Nonsense_Profile » 23 Sep 2012 22:22

I don't know, it's pretty ku
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