Discord's Master Plan <Original> <Pony><WIP?>(Criticism plz)

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Discord's Master Plan <Original> <Pony><WIP?>(Criticism plz)

Postby Omnomnomnom » 16 Sep 2012 19:52

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HJpADVMSyw8

Discord, discord, discord.
If only he had defeated the elements of harmony.
This song describes that scenario, with all the complete chaos, eternal suffering for all ponykind, yada yada yada. Mainly to express Discord's silly, relaxed, yet villain-y villain-ism.

Unfortunately, this was probably not good enough for EQD.
So, I ask for your critique, that I MIGHT someday improve enough to meet and exceed standards.

4, 5, or maybe 6 hours of project time. (Yeah, kinda lazy...)

Feed me your opinions

ps. At this point in time, I am questioning whether I should have had the Bansuri Flute actually articulate with double-toungue-ing. I might change that later. So... perhaps a WIP.
I'm always half-asleep, and I hate dubstep.
Also, you know that other, way more awesome Nomnom guy who shows up on EQD sometimes? THAT PERSON IS NOT ME.
We just happen to have similar pseudonyms.
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Re: Discord's Master Plan <Original> <Pony><WIP?>(Criticism

Postby vladnuke » 18 Sep 2012 23:13

Discord would turn the world into PASTA! Ravioli! Mama mia!
Lol accordion.
But yeah, pretty cool, very nice progression, lots of different elements used well.
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Re: Discord's Master Plan <Original> <Pony><WIP?>(Criticism

Postby Omnomnomnom » 19 Sep 2012 14:30

Ahaha yes that accordion does have an interesting flavor. Anything with pumped reeds sounds cool to my ears, from harmonicas to harmoniums.

On a more serious note, in terms of progression... do you mean chord progression or just progress in the word itself?

If the former... well, admittedly, I hadn't paid much attention to it at all. I mean, I have studied enough theory (and am currently taking a class as a high school sophomore) to work out progressions manually, but I feel that working with chords and cadences by ear saves time. (Perhaps a crucially overlooked flaw of my own, but I am hopelessly lazy D: ) I'm not even sure if I put a progression in this song. :/

If the latter... well, I'll take that as a compliment, thank you :)
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