<wip> would like feedback

[Metabrony]

so I made this, and I suck at mixing. so feedback is appreciated.

[Dabrenn]

That's sounds really nice!

I don't know exactly what sound you were going for, but I was expecting a nice liquid house beat drop at any second and it never came, you dropped a little kick drum in there at :45, but it was barely audible and it was an odd tone. I'm not very experienced either, but I like the Chord progression and the timbre of your main melody, the best just needs to hit a lot harder, or if you're not going for the sound, it needs something else done.

As for me, I'd clean up the lower end of that synth with an EQ, get a hard hitting kick with a little sidechain compression and add a more prominent pumping Sub-Bass and turn it into a nice Prog-House tune.

[elementsofharmonics]

The build has the proper tension, but you need some sort of sweep or sound to crescendo and lead into the beat (which I totally didn't expect it to go where it did, if that means anything).

Bring down all of your instruments now because they shine well enough as it is, but your drums are like a little kid jumping up and down for attention. Also, the piano has a bit too much in the middle maybe because it sounds somewhat harsh.

But holy shit, you make some baller prog house.