<pony><orchestral-ish><Finished> Fluttering garden

[Hangin' From A Cloud]

So I'm working on an orchestral-ish Fluttershy track.
What do you think? Should I add vocals to it (probably from Find a pet)? Or more instruments? Or more variety? Or asdfghjklé...
Oh and any tips on how could I make the piano solo-thing more emotive?

http://soundcloud.com/hanginfromacloud/fluttering-garden-wip

Finished it!

[Djeinus]

I think vocals would kill it. But I think you should around the second minute, or so, to slowly build up, hold on the tension with the thing that comes at 2:46 or so. and around 2:48 go BOOM with the same melody you have going there (if that makes a molecule of sense). Maybe add some brass or something, I don't know. Make it become alive. It's a nice song all in all, though.

[Dr_Dissonance]

This was pretty cool! As Djeinus said, Brass would make it excellent, consider adding them and his other point about tension building is great too.
I loved the flute part, really really flute-y! Excellent use of it there.
Not so much the string part, they were very block chord/held notes, which I always discourage...mix them up a bit!

[Magnitude Zero]

This is pretty awesome. I love what you're doing with the drums.

[EverfreeLuna]

This is a great instrumental piece and I'm not sure if vocals would suit it that well?
I agree with the others about including brass. I'm no expert but maybe brass could come in at around the 3:08 mark (When the drums and main melody return) in some form or another.
I love the flute, sounds almost Celtic

[Hangin' From A Cloud]

Thanks for the awesome feedback guys! I was grinning like an idiot when I read the posts (idk why). There is actually a tuba playing there, but I will definitely add more brass. And do something with the strings too.

[Hangin' From A Cloud]

Update bump! Finished the song, video in the OP.