<nonpony><remix><WIP> Deviance (requesting feedback)

[colortwelve]

I'm really going through some sort of creative burst here or something, because this didn't exist about 2 hours ago. That said, it has plenty of issues, but as always, I'd love a bit of feedback, if you'd be so kind :3

[vladnuke]

Hurm, I was interested in how you would put a house spin on a CODkid favorite, and you seem to have turned the more theatrical aspects of the melody into a somber march. That being said, you changed the key, and also as you were changing the timbre to fit house, you took out the hollow aspect of the synth, less kalimba, more claves. Although the change in overall mood is going in the same direction, I don't know if that is the right drection for this song. Yes, the original was minor as well, but it was a more jazzy minor rather than the slow march of this song. The bass is a bit tinny, needs more wood. Fix up the melody, make the plucks more hollow, and change up the second drop.