Yeah, the sub bass is just downright overpowering.
I mean, I can imagine in the right environment, there's some crowd out there that would create an entire genre of subwoofer-obliterating bass-fests. But just you can make something like that happen doesn't really mean you should.

I like the layout, though, personally. I feel like it could actually be extrapolated on. Like, have a few more iterations of the pattern you've got going, but have more weird instruments that you introduce. You know, techno stuff.