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<pony><original> [EDM] Twitcha Twitch

Postby Error404IsFound » 04 Sep 2012 12:45



Looking for some feedback n stuffs on this. First attempt at this kind of style and looking for ways I can improve. Thanks!
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Re: <pony><original> [EDM] Twitcha Twitch

Postby XXDarkShadow79XX » 05 Sep 2012 12:38

Well, for starters, the mixing could use a bit of work, especially at the drop. I'm also not a big fan of the melodies in the song. They're just a bit repetitive and irritating. I also think your white noise should just be a biiiiit quieter. However, I do love that sub. A lot. How did you make it?
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Re: <pony><original> [EDM] Twitcha Twitch

Postby Error404IsFound » 05 Sep 2012 12:48

Sub was made by taking a bass preset from my Sylenth, dropping it down 2 octaves, and removing its phaser and distortion. Then re Equed it a bit.
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Re: <pony><original> [EDM] Twitcha Twitch

Postby NewWorldMare » 05 Sep 2012 20:17

There is a *lot* of sub, though, during the drop. This makes the drums sound too quiet. I'd suggest mixing down the sub.
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Re: <pony><original> [EDM] Twitcha Twitch

Postby Error404IsFound » 05 Sep 2012 20:28

Thanks for the feedback guys! I really didn't hear most of this stuff you guys are pointing out until now. Tyvm
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Re: <pony><original> [EDM] Twitcha Twitch

Postby ph00tbag » 06 Sep 2012 20:16

Yeah, the sub bass is just downright overpowering.

I mean, I can imagine in the right environment, there's some crowd out there that would create an entire genre of subwoofer-obliterating bass-fests. But just you can make something like that happen doesn't really mean you should. :)

I like the layout, though, personally. I feel like it could actually be extrapolated on. Like, have a few more iterations of the pattern you've got going, but have more weird instruments that you introduce. You know, techno stuff.
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Re: <pony><original> [EDM] Twitcha Twitch

Postby Error404IsFound » 06 Sep 2012 21:41

Yea, I really don't know how the sub got that loud. In the project it is and was set to really quiet, then after a little mastering and converting it was just... there. Its kinda weird. TY for feedbacks
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