<Pony><Original><First> Legends (Trixie Song)

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<Pony><Original><First> Legends (Trixie Song)

Postby Pimps_McGee » 03 Sep 2012 00:51

First thing I've actually ever completed. It's sort of a electro house thing that's based around what if Trixie's story of her beating the Ursa Major were true and what happened to the town afterwards.



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Re: <Pony><Original><First> Legends (Trixie Song)

Postby S.A.S.Falcon » 03 Sep 2012 07:07

I actually got a really big 'classic video game boss' vibe from this, I don't know if that was of any intention, but I gotta say, this is kinda awesome.
The only real critique I can think of is that the second part of the song kinda dragged on for a bit longer than it should have. Other than that, I like it.
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Re: <Pony><Original><First> Legends (Trixie Song)

Postby Pimps_McGee » 03 Sep 2012 16:56

Yeah I have to agree on the second part. I should have cut it down a little bit but oh well now.
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Postby S.A.S.Falcon » 03 Sep 2012 22:00

Pimps_McGee wrote:Yeah I have to agree on the second part. I should have cut it down a little bit but oh well now.


That's the beauty of these future references, they help to make our songs that much better :D
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Re: <Pony><Original><First> Legends (Trixie Song)

Postby ph00tbag » 06 Sep 2012 20:41

I personally get Union Jack - Red Herring vibes from this. Especially with the chord progressions. You need to take that pause after the breakdown, and bring back the beat, but with the acid lead. The track just feels unfinished, otherwise.

You don't really need the gated white noise on that lead, either. I prefer my acid pure, please.
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