<non-pony><WIP>I can't think of a title

[Friv]

I took a long hiatus but today i finally decided to sit down and write a song. For once, I was quite pleased with the results.
But I figured that (since I'm mostly finished with the composition) before I mix and master, I would need feedback.
So, please give me some (any) feedback/criticism that you could. (also any ideas on a title would help :3)

http://soundcloud.com/allons-y/zombie-wip