<pony><dubstepish><remix>The Perfect Stallion

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<pony><dubstepish><remix>The Perfect Stallion

Postby vaceslav » 29 Aug 2012 08:33

I don't see this song around anywhere near as much as I'd like.

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Re: <pony><dubstepish><remix>The Perfect Stallion

Postby Hangin' From A Cloud » 29 Aug 2012 16:54

I really, really like the vocals starting from 0:45 and 2:18 and during the soft drop as someone has put it :). I would make the bass more audible during the breakdown/intro sections, but just by a little. Maybe add some subtle reverb to them wubs.
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Re: <pony><dubstepish><remix>The Perfect Stallion

Postby AgonistAgent » 29 Aug 2012 19:06

That's suprisingly chill.

I like it.
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Re: <pony><dubstepish><remix>The Perfect Stallion

Postby Magnitude Zero » 29 Aug 2012 19:24

Ooh. I like this one a lot. Those chopped vocals are really nice. Couple things though.

- Piano coming in at the beginning sounds oddly-timed with the vocals.
- The singing/non-chopped vocals could use a touch of reverb.
- The snare's panned delay is favoring the left too much; maybe pan the whole thing to the right, or use a ping-pong delay with slight panning.
- I'm not sure what you were trying to do with Scootaloo's voice at about 3:15, but it sounds very strange.
- The ending is a little sudden. May I suggest an outro of some sort?

EDIT: Also, could use more sub bass.
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