<original> <non-pony> StickyCone - You Will Die

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Re: <original> <non-pony> StickyCone - You Will Die

Postby Stars In Autumn » 21 Aug 2012 22:21

Hello,

Some of those synths are really interesting. A lot of cool portamento.

Here's what I think could be worked on: that first synth sticks out quite a bit and it's rhythm is out of sync of the rest of the song, making it rather distracting. Songs that typically have that gradual speedup usually happen quite a bit faster and don't have a competing rhythm going on. One by Swedish House Mafia comes to mind.

Just my 2 cents.
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Re: <original> <non-pony> StickyCone - You Will Die

Postby Hangin' From A Cloud » 22 Aug 2012 06:39

Those bass sounds are beast. And the slides are cool too. Nice work on the synths :)
But that up-down slide (or portamento,whatever) during the drops sometimes gets a little ... annoying. Well at least for me. And during the last drop I would try using a 2 snares/bar drum pattern to make things more intense/interesting.
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