<WIP><PONY/NONPONY> So uh...

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<WIP><PONY/NONPONY> So uh...

Postby Ed Viper » 18 Aug 2012 20:01

Yeah. I'm really not sure where to take this song, considering scrapping it. Any of you guys see anything of value here?

Also, drop needs work. Lots of work. Oh, and after the drop. Yeah, that needs work, too. The wubs, also, yeah, those need work. And uh... and the rest of the song too. Y'know what, yeah, it all needs work.

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Re: <WIP><PONY/NONPONY> So uh...

Postby Habanc » 18 Aug 2012 21:38

I think some mixing/balancing is in order, since the wobble needs to be louder IMO. Same goes for the snare, it needs s'more punch. I haven't done dubstep personally, but here's what worked for me to widen/strengthen my sounds:

- Chorus, especially for Bass sounds.
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- Since you have FL, I like to use the "Fruity Flangus" and set it to the preset "Deep Chorus" and tweak it to my liking.

Overall, this track is what you make of it. You can either put the work into it and make it shine, or take a loss and start anew. Nobody's going to tell you to scrap it, you kinda have to make that call yourself. We're just here to provide feedback on what you posted.
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Re: <WIP><PONY/NONPONY> So uh...

Postby Ed Viper » 18 Aug 2012 23:32

Habanc wrote:I think some mixing/balancing is in order, since the wobble needs to be louder IMO. Same goes for the snare, it needs s'more punch. I haven't done dubstep personally, but here's what worked for me to widen/strengthen my sounds:

- Chorus, especially for Bass sounds.
~Or~
- Since you have FL, I like to use the "Fruity Flangus" and set it to the preset "Deep Chorus" and tweak it to my liking.

Overall, this track is what you make of it. You can either put the work into it and make it shine, or take a loss and start anew. Nobody's going to tell you to scrap it, you kinda have to make that call yourself. We're just here to provide feedback on what you posted.


Oh yeah, I forgot to mention, this is entirely unmixed. No mixing done yet whatsoever.

I was mostly curious as to whether or not you guys think this is a good starting point for a good song. I apologize for not making that more clear in my first post.
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