<Original> <Pony> A Night-Mare

[HAX]

http://soundcloud.com/starlex-1/sarphog-a-night-mare-short

A short and somewhat dark/"scary" piece. Was thinking of Luna turning into NMM.
The first part (someone please tell me what these "parts" are actually called) where everything but the piano goes quiet, would be when the transformation is complete, and the last one would be when Celestia banished her. I'm somewhat unsure of whose perspective it's from.. Guess it jumps around a bit.

Ah, enough of da rambling. Feedback appreciated, and this is the first track I'd say I can call done, even though it's short

Also, the sound of choice is inspired by Glitchhog's song Rarity Kills Sweetie Belle, so I supposed I should thank him :3

[Conduit]

I like it.

It gets a really repetitive though, so you might want to change up what the piano is playing a bit more frequently, or add more instruments on top or both.

Unless you're trying to make this purely a piano piece, I suggest leaving the start as it is, but after the "transformation" adding in some huge orchestral percussion and other instruments(Brass, strings, etc). (See makkons work if your wondering about the percussion, he's a master of it)

[HAX]

I like it.

It gets a really repetitive though, so you might want to change up what the piano is playing a bit more frequently, or add more instruments on top or both.

Unless you're trying to make this purely a piano piece, I suggest leaving the start as it is, but after the "transformation" adding in some huge orchestral percussion and other instruments(Brass, strings, etc). (See makkons work if your wondering about the percussion, he's a master of it)

I originally planned on adding a somewhat grim bass, and eventually make it a bit more intense, and then end it the way I have it now.. But the block happened.. Which is also why it's a bit repetive.. And nothing I ever make ends up done if I don't finish it in almost one go :<

I'll take a good look at Makkon's work though, thanks for the advice, really appreciated