<non-pony><original>Boundless

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<non-pony><original>Boundless

Postby Amnesiac » 07 Aug 2012 11:47

Greetings once again! Nothing pony this time around, just a drum and bass track I made.

Hope you guys enjoy it, and, as always, I'm open to critique.

I'm monumentally lazy and don't tend to upload much. Welcoming to critique!
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Re: <non-pony><original>Boundless

Postby tesselode » 07 Aug 2012 13:03

This song has some issues with its production. The kick drum is rather wimpy sounding at the beginning, and when the lower kick drum comes in, it sounds OK, but there's some rattle-y high frequencies that you might want to cut out. The bass seems like it's really loud, and you should probably have it duck out of the way of the kick so that it doesn't drown out the kick. Also, this song is kind of repetitive, although it does make good background music.

Good things: I like the harmonies you have going on. The overall feel of the song is actually quite cool. Just add some variety and mix it better and you'll have a winner.
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Re: <non-pony><original>Boundless

Postby Amnesiac » 07 Aug 2012 14:20

Ah, many thanks! I've never really tried anything drum-and-bass before, so I appreciate the feedback. I'll try balancing it a bit more.

As for the repetitiveness, that was intentional. I usually don't like my stuff to be TOO repetitive, but I let this one be more that way so it's a bit more relaxing and trance-y.

Again, thanks for the feedback!
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