<WIP><Original><Pony> Waltz for the Mane Six(critique?)

[silverblaze]

Hey everypony! It's been a while since I was online, but I just wanted to know what you guys thought about this song?



This is my first ever Waltz that I've done.
I know I need to change the third part of the song to include the second part some how, but I'm wondering if you guys can find anything that could make this song better?

Any critique?

-SilverBlaze

[Belgerum]

In my opinion, this seem a little bit high in tempo to be a waltz. One of the big things about waltz's is you have to be aware that it is dance music, though not dubstep or techno dance music. You have to imagine a person doing the "1-2-3, 1-2-3, 1-2-3," of the waltz,and if there is some difficulty that makes the dance hard to imagine, that's an issue that needs to be dealt with. There is definitely some good work here, though. I love the melody, and the soloistic instrumental in the middle of the piece.