Lyra, Octavia and Vinyl Scratch: Nu Poni

[Whitetail]

Still haven't sorted a name for this yet, but:

I also like the idea of messing with keys and time signatures... getting progressive with your ponies.

"Songs About My Ponies" - Venetian Hooves

This really inspired me, and thus piece was born.

It's really early wip, but I'd like some feedback on the general concept, execution, etc. etc.
(Atm I'm fearing I may be getting caught in a muddy aura of reverb)

Besides, people were complaining about how short my last Lyra + Octavia piece was, so I figured I'd give them something a little longer.

Link here:
http://www.box.net/shared/vhxddeciz7g13793vum1


Also the name is a working title, if anyone has a better suggestion I'm open

[PinkiePieSwear]

I'm really liking it so far. I can't wait to hear more of this!

[Overkillius]

I have no clue. I don't really analyze this kind of music often (sorry). If you'll allow me to have an opinion I say that it is really ambient and random. Maybe trim it down a bit and try to stick to a simple bass line? Maybe have some parts where you just drone an A2? I tried playing along with my keboard... and droning an A2 and replaying it at the start of every measure or so sounded interesting to me. That's all I got. Sorry if I'm not helpful.

[Whitetail]

I'm really liking it so far. I can't wait to hear more of this!

Thanks

I have no clue. I don't really analyze this kind of music often (sorry). If you'll allow me to have an opinion I say that it is really ambient and random. Maybe trim it down a bit and try to stick to a simple bass line? Maybe have some parts where you just drone an A2? I tried playing along with my keboard... and droning an A2 and replaying it at the start of every measure or so sounded interesting to me. That's all I got. Sorry if I'm not helpful.

Nah it's fine, I know this sort of music definitely isn't for everyone, I just heard the idea and had to make it happen.

Anywho, wip 2 time

http://www.box.net/shared/i35cc1a1prjlepd4ff48

[Overkillius]

I liked it a bit more this go around. Either I am acquiring a taste, you made good improvements, or a combination of the two.

[Whitetail]

http://www.box.net/shared/gjbepeudapl0gibcdfxv

Think I'm done with this

[Pinkie Cake]

This is awesome. It really looks like Venetian Snares was your inspiration.
Plus I really like the theme of this song.

[General Mumble]

I'm loving this so far, Derpy. It's just wonderful.