<original>Artimeus - In Exile

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<original>Artimeus - In Exile

Postby Artimeus » 22 Jun 2012 20:22

Very well gents, fire away! This is my latest creation, and probably one of my better ones since the prehistoric days of 2011. Tell what you think, you glorious masters of the decibel.

http://soundcloud.com/artimeus/artimeus-retaliate
DAW: FL Studio 10
VST of Choice: TAL NoiseMaker
Genre: No thanks, I'll just have a water.
I'm on Soundcloud... finally.
http://soundcloud.com/artimeus
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Re: <original>Artimeus - In Exile

Postby Sgt-Whip (DJQ) » 22 Jun 2012 22:19

Very nice trance. I think you did a bangin' job here, personally, and I couldn't tell you too much about what to do to improve it. It's also rather good for mixing with too. You left a decent amount of room on the end for introducing a new drum pattern for a live set, so good job overall I think.

Music production wise I'm not so into trance, but this would be great to drop onto the dance floor.
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Re: <original>Artimeus - In Exile

Postby Sgt-Whip (DJQ) » 22 Jun 2012 22:25

On a quick second listen, I notice that at around 1:03 and 1:31, when you drop one of your mid range instruments for 16 beats each, there seems to be a high sharp sound coupled with the drum and snare, which can be a bit tough on the ears. However, that might just be me. Besides that this track is still well done in my book.
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