<Original><WiP> Dance of the Nocturnal (For After Party)

[Belgerum]

http://soundcloud.com/belgerum/dance-of-the-nocturnal-wip-1

Another dinky WiP for the music board to critique, and another work in progress that'll be submitted to the After Party album. I DO know that I stink at mixing and mastering, and I haven't done much of that yet, but if anyone has any comments on the piece and what they like/dislike, it would be much appreciated.

[R-Y-S-E]

Sounds good. To me it sounds like an "escape" or "chase" scene type of music at the start. One thing I personally think could be changed to improve it is to lower (slightly) the volume of the pads/synth sounds at the end because they seem a l'il overpowering. Overall I think all the sounds go together well, and it sounds very nice. Hopefully it'll be in the album

[Belgerum]

LOL I guess I can hear the "chase" bit. I guess I more imagine an evil dance around a bonfire, but I do like that idea.

Thanks for the suggestion, too! I'll definitely try that.

[Belgerum]

Added some more content, did some mixing, and came up with another version. Opinions/criticism?

http://soundcloud.com/belgerum/dance-of-the-nocturnal-wip-2