<wip> <pony> <original> Monitor Everthing

[Quix]

Thank you for listening! I'd appreciate suggestions and criticisms about what sounds off/could be improved. I have not mastered this track yet, and I will be panning instruments/adjusting volumes soon.

I will be adding Twilight vocal soundclips after the rest of the track is finished.

EDIT: I added an interlude at 1:39 to 2:08. I'm not sure if I'm happy with it.

http://soundcloud.com/quix117/wip3

[LoreRD]

It sounds pretty good, but right now there isn't a whole lot of variation in it. Maybe add a section that breaks off from the main riff? It would make it sound more interesting.

[Quix]

Thanks for the feedback!

I added an interlude at 1:39 to 2:08, but I'm not sure if I'm happy with it. Should I try to change it some more, or keep it as it is?

[LoreRD]

If you're not completely happy with it, then work with it until you are. In my opinion, it sounds better now.