<pony><remix><wip> - BBBFF Remix (feedback appreciated)

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<pony><remix><wip> - BBBFF Remix (feedback appreciated)

Postby NewWorldMare » 11 Jun 2012 19:42

http://soundcloud.com/newworldmare/tsbff-wip

Tentatively entitled "Test Subject Best Friends Forever", this song combines the sublime lyrics of BBBFF with samples from the video game Portal, specifically GLaDOS voice lines. I have two questions in particular.

1. The vocals... just sound wrong. Especially right at the beginning, and right at the end, they simply set my teeth on edge. I've re-aligned and EQ'ed till the cows come home. Can anyone shed some light on this?

2. The GLaDOS samples. I personally think they work with the song, both musically and in terms of telling a story, but I'd like to know what you think.

Thanks in advance for the feedback :)
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Re: <pony><remix><wip> - BBBFF Remix (feedback appreciated)

Postby Sense A » 11 Jun 2012 21:54

Whew, very groovy bass line you've got goin, and I love your funky cymbal work. As for the general idea, it's very cool, and very creative, kinda puts BBBFF in a darker situation, nice imagination! GlaDOS totally goes with your ideals as well. The one thing I could say is... WHERE'S YOUR KICK DRUM MAN?! You gotta bring that out in the mix!! see the bass lines bompin, twilight's singin her heart out, even your snare and hi hat are rockin, THE KICK NEEDS TO BE THERE TO GIVE AN OOOMPH :D haha and i love the synth solo you put in. I love glitch-hop, you gotta tell me when this is done, nice job brony! As for your vocal problem... sorry I'm not too good in the mastering/EQ area just yet... but I'm learning, ha good luck man
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Re: <pony><remix><wip> - BBBFF Remix (feedback appreciated)

Postby NewWorldMare » 12 Jun 2012 08:25

Listening to it again, I think you're right about the kick :) Thanks for the feedback!
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Re: <pony><remix><wip> - BBBFF Remix (feedback appreciated)

Postby wu long cha » 12 Jun 2012 14:40

holy moly DAT BASSLINE

small thing though: i thought the GLaDOS lines worked really nicely, but the difference in quality (is that the right term to use?) between the two vocal sampels was somewhat....jarring? i'm not quite sure how to fix that, either D:

other than that this track was pretty awesome!
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