{pony] {origiinal} <WIP> FLuttershys house collab with jime3

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Re: {pony] {origiinal} <WIP> FLuttershys house collab with j

Postby NewWorldMare » 11 Jun 2012 18:33

The delay on the voices is a little loud. It makes it difficult to understand the lines. There are some parts where it works, e.g. the "*squeak* - feel better? - no" sequence, but at the beginning it just sounds muddled. Maybe you should restrict the delay to only certain parts of the vocals.

I'm also not so hot about the glitch squeak in the last third of the song, but that's your preference.

Um... maybe build into the drums a little more? The cymbal sounds almost too sharp. I don't really have anything else to say. It sounds pretty solid so far! :)
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Re: {pony] {origiinal} <WIP> FLuttershys house collab with j

Postby soultensionbenjamin » 11 Jun 2012 23:14

Yeahhh jims building up those drums so i cant wait for that and hes a better dubsteper than me (and a musician in general) But thanks im taking out the speech parts now
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