<Pony><Cover> Caramel's Light

[Meelz]

I figure I haven't been on here in ages, might as well bring my latest song and ask for feedback.

This here's a cover of Poni1Kenobi's song, pretty much re-done from the ground up, guitars, vocals, bass by me. Drums are Addictive Drums(inb4 glaze and overkillius won't let me off for that), and ye.
So far I've already been told to better my vocals and the guitar tone, but otherwise how's it sound?

[LoreRD]

The vocals could be less "mumbly", but that's the only notable complaint I have. Other than that, it sounds good.