<nonpony> <original> Assembly Line

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<nonpony> <original> Assembly Line

Postby Quix » 01 Jun 2012 13:46

Thanks to LoreRD for the title! :D

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Re: <nonpony> <original> Assembly Line

Postby -djmk- » 01 Jun 2012 15:45

the square at :30 sounds kinda random. doesn't sound like you're following any kind of structure. not much going on in the upper register. phrases aren't that clear.
love that bass synth. really the song's not bad despite some messy points.
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