"World Famous Bassline Brothers" (2nd WIP)[CRITIQUE PLEASE]

[BassRabbit]

Okay, I've played around with it a bit. Editted and changed some of the synths, added a bass, and a better intro. How is it now?

[Matthew N.]

The only thing that I don't find fitting is that bass. Too deep, and yet doesn't give that punch. But this is awesome for WIP. Keep it up, can't wait for the full v.

[Sugarholik]

^What he said. And I might add, that vocals are way too quiet. Bring up those and make the bass brighter and you're good to go.

[GhostXb]

I like the intro, however, I'm not quite sure if I like this more then the first wip. Aside from what has been already mentioned about the bass, I think it could relate a little closer to the main theme, because it feels out of place. If you can play the bass and the synth at the same time and it sounds good, then I think the bass would find a comfortable place in the mix.

Also, I really like the synth melody from 44 - 55, I'm guessing it's the same melody from the original song, but if you can bring that out along with the bass, vocals, and drums, then I see potential for the climatic part of the song.

Good luck with the song, look forward to seeing another update.