<Non-pony> <Original> <House> Music.mp3

[Undefined Variable]

Finally learned basic music theory, this is the result. Opinions and constructive criticism are welcome.
http://soundcloud.com/undefinedvariable/undefined-variable-music

[colortwelve]

I looooove the sample for some reason. Maybe it's the German accent

On the criticism side, the melodies are a bit simplistic. They work musically, but not quite in the context of a song that's almost 5 minutes long. I'd try adding a bit of variation, and possibly one or two entirely different melodies that don't just elaborate on the basic riff. But that's just me

[vladnuke]

Everytime that bass twang hits, it sounds like a little fart and I start laughing uncontrollably because I am an immature child.

As for it music theory-wise, umm, err, you know there are more than three notes, right? That you can use something other than 5ths? That although the transposition of that fifth makes for a nice ditty, it's not really a good demonstration of music theory. Also progression. Yes, I know this is house music. No, that doesn't mean it has to sit in one place.

However, with the combination of fart noises and silly ditties, I will stroll down the street completely naked save a top hat with a boombox on my shoulder playing this.

[Undefined Variable]

I looooove the sample for some reason. Maybe it's the German accent

On the criticism side, the melodies are a bit simplistic. They work musically, but not quite in the context of a song that's almost 5 minutes long. I'd try adding a bit of variation, and possibly one or two entirely different melodies that don't just elaborate on the basic riff. But that's just me

Thanks, I'll work on the melodies a bit more next time.