<pony><Critique wanted> El Buffalo Pasa

[Trillionage]

http://soundcloud.com/trillionage/el-buffalo-pasa

I finally finished my first song! W00t!

EDIT:

http://soundcloud.com/trillionage/el-buffalo-pasa-re-remaster

Did some changes to the guitar.

[Sugarholik]

Have we been here before?
Congratulations for your first song!

Very nice piece. The downside is that with more realistic instruments (dat guitar...) it would be twenty times better :/ Maybe some sort of bass would have spiced it up nicely as well.

[Trillionage]

Dat guitar indeed :/ Maybe i'll have to ask for help. How are the winds and percussion though?

[Sugarholik]

Dat guitar indeed :/ Maybe i'll have to ask for help. How are the winds and percussion though?

Good enough if you ask me.

[Trillionage]

Hey i did some changes, does it sound better now?

[Facade]

sounds nice so far still listening as i right this
hmmm i hear slight dissonance :/ it sounds like the pan pipe type thing is causing it

[Sugarholik]

Hey i did some changes, does it sound better now?

Well, yah. But now the guitar is like totally gone. :/ And it's playing a big role in this song. You should get someone to play it for realsies if you want this to be awesome, but this is good for now too. You don't need to make it absolutely perfect (it IS your first song afterall).

sounds nice so far still listening as i right this
hmmm i hear slight dissonance :/ it sounds like the pan pipe type thing is causing it

Now that you mentioned it, there are some weird harmonies.

[Trillionage]

Which pan pipe? I imagine its the more bass one. And the guitar is still there...it just seems to have been over powered by everything else.

To FL!