<ORIGINAL><PONY><Kyoga - Bringing the Rain

[the4thImpulse]

The pads in the beginning have a weird pitch glithcy sound to them that just doesn't sound right to me, it could have been intentional though. They do flow together nicely. The guitar sounds a bit too distorted for the feel of the song. The part at 2:00 doesn't really go anywhere emotionally or tesion wise and in my opinion its far too long without any changes in sound design. There isn't enough happening in the background to keep me interested in listening over and over.

The parts you have are well done for the most part but the track just felt too long in areas.


It reminded me somewhat of this song and I want to point out all the changes in the background and panning that keep me wanting to hear it again.

[Gnarrkhaz]

The pads in the beginning have a weird pitch glithcy sound to them that just doesn't sound right to me, it could have been intentional though.

I love it. Same for the guitar. I think it's good the way it is. However i agree with 4thImpulse that it's a bit too long overall.

[Ed Viper]

Well it's better than anything I've ever made! I really like the moody feel of the song. I agree though that you should turn down the distortion a little bit, but not get rid of it completely, as it still gives the song a nice, full feel.