<WIP>My first draft on a song! Need feedback!

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So, this is my first acual song which I've offically shared, touched my first DAW 3 almost 4 weeks ago (8th april).
It's just a rought draft to get some very welcome critice, it is obviously by no means done.

I used ballon party as an inspiration to this, I probably won't participate as I'm really bad and it isn't hard at all.

Turn the volume up.





I need to get myself a better vst and upgrade my DAW from demo version.

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Comon guys criticize it, really want some feedback on this as music really interests me.
:C

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Perhaps, I basically did 2 versions just to try out different melodies and effects :>