First Full Length Song - "Forest Fire" nonpony moombahcore

[Two-Twelve]

Finally buckled down and made a decent length song. Hopefully I can actually start making pony music soon. As far as this song goes, I am still yet to grasp mixing/mastering so its kind of muddy. The drop could use some more presence as well but I just wanted to get it out there. So here it is.

http://soundcloud.com/two-twelve/forest-fire

Please Critique

[Whitetail]

Sub bass man, your mix is like entirely devoid of it.
Take a sine or triangle bass and lower it under your actual bass sound, EQ the "upper" bass so it leaves the lowest parts to the sub bass. That's what gives EDM tracks their pump, it's what rumbles your speakers.

[Two-Twelve]

Sub bass man, your mix is like entirely devoid of it.
Take a sine or triangle bass and lower it under your actual bass sound, EQ the "upper" bass so it leaves the lowest parts to the sub bass. That's what gives EDM tracks their pump, it's what rumbles your speakers.

Damn. I actually did put some sub bass in, but it made the low end really cluttered, so I guess when I was eqing it I pretty much cut it out completely. Thanks for pointing that out.