<wip><original> First song, feedback needed

[Conduit]

Hey guys, this is my first week of making digital music, and I managed to come up with this Luna/Nightmare Moon-ish sounding track. It's nowhere near complete and I would absolutely love feedback, along with any advice and tips on making better music in general.

EDIT: Removed the pony tag since it's not really pony at this point in its development.

http://soundcloud.com/flatflish/dark-piano