<pony><original><wip> Slip Up (Electro)

[gravyman]

http://soundcloud.com/gravyman/gravyman-slip-up

Something i put together a few nights ago, would appreciate some feedback on it.

[colortwelve]

If chill was what you were going for with this, then you did a damn good job. I honestly can't come up with anything that could make it better, unless someone remixed it into a ripoff of Feed Me.

[gravyman]

If chill was what you were going for with this, then you did a damn good job. I honestly can't come up with anything that could make it better, unless someone remixed it into a ripoff of Feed Me.

Thanks! Actually I was aiming for some chill track so I guess i reached my criteria, glad you like it.

[KemicolKid97]

I find this techno or electronic, Electro tends to be aggressive and tends to go harder... but you did a nice job making this song, Good Work!

[gravyman]

I find this techno or electronic, Electro tends to be aggressive and tends to go harder... but you did a nice job making this song, Good Work!

I agree, but felt like it was closer to electro than electronic hence the heavy sidechained bassline. Oh, and thanks!

[XXDarkShadow79XX]

Just make that synth louder and crisper. It's absolutely fantastic and should stand out in the track more. Some sweeping pads would also help along that chill atmosphere.