by StormWolf » 07 Apr 2012 01:00
This certainly does have a lot of potential, but you're probably going to want to drop to be much "harder".
Try experimenting with designing and building sounds with whatever synths you're using, both by trial and error and with online tutorials to help get those more gritty wobbles!
You should download some drum samples too, and play around with layering and processing them (I'm sure there are many threads in the "Technique" section about drum EQing and compression) to get some nice really punchy kicks and really snappy snares and hats with clarity, as opposed to (I think?) FL defaults.
The lead up could have a few more effects, but of course, that is all choice based.
Overall, IMO the song probably needs more complexity, more layers. Maybe try adding some pads at some point, and a deep strong sub-bass underneath both the wobbles and the intro? Or maybe thing like arps, side melodies, chord stabs, up to you I guess. Variation in the wobbles would be good too (I don't mean variations as in pitch or LFO frequency, more like, different patches).