<original><pony>Land of Wonder

[Elterwisp]

Well, so this is the first music which I have ever done.
It is pretty much inspired by Fluttershy.
I would love to hear feedback on which parts of the song can be improved or to make it sound better.

(Pardon for my lack of post since I am more of a lurker than a poster).

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4lDFYZ36 ... re=mh_lolz
(Can't seems to embed the video into the post so i shall just put a link here.)

Thanks

[sv0mp]

can you try speeding up the beggining. i wanna see how it sounds

[GHO5T_Official]

Needs I bit of quantanization but good for your first song! I'll sub you

[Freewave]

Good for a first track. It's a little bit in a no-man's land genre-wise and is a little repetitive. When the beat hits its almost a pretty hardstyle as its a little overpowering. It's a good start but don't be afraid to add more elements, different melodies, and I always think a sample or two always helps.

here's an embed for you (erase eveything after the & including the &)

[Elterwisp]

can you try speeding up the beggining. i wanna see how it sounds

Well, since I do not wanna upload it on soundcloud, here's a download link for the sped up beginning http://www.mediafire.com/?7n5ptihtnr11fk3

Needs I bit of quantanization but good for your first song! I'll sub you

Never knew about quantization until you mentioned it, thanks for the feedback and subscribing!

Good for a first track. It's a little bit in a no-man's land genre-wise and is a little repetitive. When the beat hits its almost a pretty hardstyle as its a little overpowering. It's a good start but don't be afraid to add more elements, different melodies, and I always think a sample or two always helps.

Yeah I kinda messed up on the genre since I wasn't so sure on what genre I was planning to go for but anyway, thanks for the feedback. I'll take it into consideration for my next song