<PONY><WIP><ORIGINAL>The Legend of Pinkie Pie

[Friv]

Please critique my new song, entitled "The Legend of Pinkie Pie". It's a play on the Legend of Zelda Overworld Theme, with lots of complextro 8bit-ness and some breakbeat drums as well as glitched vocals of our favorite party pony. Any criticism or advice is needed and appreciated. I plan to finish this soon so I need feedback for this snippet of the song. Enjoy :3
http://soundcloud.com/frivolousmonkey/the-legend-of-pinkie-pie

[the4thImpulse]

I know its complextro but a lot of the glitchy sounds are a little too random and don't fit together well, or sound like one bassline/lead. It could use a lot of eqing and mixing on every track to make it sound more in unison. I like what your going for and think the initial idea is good but this song is not there yet, keep working at it its the only way to get better.