<Pony> <Original> <House> Everypony Should Smile

[Orschmann]

Hi there! So here's my first pony song (second song I've ever actually finished). Would appreciate some feedback.

http://soundcloud.com/orschmann/everypony-should-smile

[DrSorkenstein]

I quite like it, the intro seems a bit long though since the track really kicks off at about 1.44 when the piano comes in since it completes the beat with some melody (isn't that taken from the pony ever pony should know song though?). A few of the samples sounded a bit shoehorned in and didn't really add to the track. However for your second song it's pretty good.

[Orschmann]

Yeah, the melody at 1:44 is from "Becoming Popular". The basic premise of the track is a collaboration between Rarity and Pinkie, which is why it transitions into "Smile, Smile, Smile". I definitely agree about some of the samples really not fitting. Thanks for the feedback!