<Original><Pony> Party of Two V1.0

[phantomignition]

http://soundcloud.com/phantomignition/party-of-two

I may not even wind up putting this anywhere else, but I thought it'd be good to at least see what I've done wrong on this so I can improve. If I can record good vocals on this I may use it elsewhere, but otherwise it's just practice. Also, this is my first post, so bear with me if I break something...

[the4thImpulse]

You haven't broke anything, a lot of people post here first asking for criticism. There is a place for introductions in the community section.

The track is alright, it sounds like some of the samples are crakling and clipping, I don't know if that is intentional. There is also lot missing in the high end of the frequency spectrum that makes the track feel really empty and dull.

[phantomignition]

The track is alright, it sounds like some of the samples are crakling and clipping, I don't know if that is intentional. There is also lot missing in the high end of the frequency spectrum that makes the track feel really empty and dull.

Yeah, the cracking is part of why I'm not going to use it elsewhere... I'll try to work on it, or just start over when I get a better DAW.

[the4thImpulse]

The track is alright, it sounds like some of the samples are crakling and clipping, I don't know if that is intentional. There is also lot missing in the high end of the frequency spectrum that makes the track feel really empty and dull.

Yeah, the cracking is part of why I'm not going to use it elsewhere... I'll try to work on it, or just start over when I get a better DAW.

'What are you using now?

[phantomignition]

The track is alright, it sounds like some of the samples are crakling and clipping, I don't know if that is intentional. There is also lot missing in the high end of the frequency spectrum that makes the track feel really empty and dull.

Yeah, the cracking is part of why I'm not going to use it elsewhere... I'll try to work on it, or just start over when I get a better DAW.

'What are you using now?

Magix Music Maker MX... admittedly it's just some cheap thing from Target that I got as a gift. I kind of like it because it's simple, but as for effects it only has a few, and I probably used every good one in that song. You also can't get synths or VSTs or whatever it is for free with this as far as I'm sure, and it hardly came with any synths. I was planning on getting FL Studio when I could.