<WIP> <Original> First track

[Legion]

This is the first piece of music I've ever created that's not an 8/16 bar loop or something similar. I forced myself to create a full song, and decided on making a rap beat because I have no fucking idea how to make a full instrumental track because I thought it'd be fun. I don't know any rappers, but whatever. Fun to make regardless. So... yeah. Feedback would be appreciated, just keep in mind this is my first thing ever.

I also just realized it sounds way too much like One Trick Pony. Ignore that.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/60584788/i%20dont%20even.wav