Its nice and pleasant. Could use some bass as stated but many improve with further development. It's got that sound that's very common with first time producers so maybe if you feel its missing something (and it kind of is if you nitpick) you can try some other vsts in the mix. Again nothing is bad with it but its really the difference between good and great and which you're aiming for and what overall sound you want

Really like the ytube image with the music, thats a perfect fit.