<original><pony> Send Your Sister to the Sun

[XiF]

http://soundcloud.com/xifmusic/send-your-sister-to-the-moon

Why not?
This was the first song I ever made; I'm uploading it because I'm just curious about what people will say. kthnxbai

[the4thImpulse]

First song, congradulations!

Its quite repetitive and needs a lot more variation in sound design/synthesis and patterns/note structure.
What you have here is all good especially for a first song, it just needs much more to it.