<Pony> <WIP> <Original> Need feedback

[lunarz]

Okay guys, my last two tracks sucked. This however will not, im going to spend time on it.
I need feedback, i plan on it being dubstep with samples of rarity in.
Anything would be useful.
I plan on making it around 5 mins and it wont be shit.
I know rarity is too queit and the wubs are crap, but its a WIP and lots of things are going to change and be added.
Thanks guys.

http://soundcloud.com/officiallunarz/rarirty-dirty-wip

[the4thImpulse]

I would use some better cymbal samples, those ones sound really generic and simple. I think its a bit too early to get good detailed advice yet, keep working on it I think your off to a good start.