<pony><original>Wintergreen - Assertiveness

[Wintergreen]

I tried a little experimenting with this one, as with all of my songs so far.

Guitar done by the classy Stripe x

Enjoy



http://soundcloud.com/paul-denson/assertiveness-taking-control

As always, I'd love to hear what you all have to say, be it positive, critical, or random.
(Random's my favorite, by the way)

[CGEyeGuy]

I will reply in each way.
I love the use of effects!
It is very repetitive though since I am hearing the same notes played.
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[SeventhElement]

I do like the effects as well. I like the little random record scratches and all that.

The chiptune arp was one of my favorite parts, especially when you brought the guitar into the mix. Use of applause samples and all buildups and breakdowns were very nicely executed.

The complaint I can think of mainly is the kick is a bit quiet (to me anyways, but things sound different with my studio headphones).

[Wintergreen]

The complaint I can think of mainly is the kick is a bit quiet

Yeah, I'm working on that for the final-final version to go with the (hopefully) album, if I finish it.

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I happen to like them.