I showed the WIP on this site a week ago or so, and here is the final version.
It got featured on EQD, where i kinda got mixed responses. Most of the people i've spoken to, and all of the comments on the video says it's good, but i've also received some "meh" answers, without actually telling me what to improve.
Soooo, i thought, why not ask you guys?

What do you guys think? What do i need to have in my mind when i compose my next tune, etc etc.