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by AerieFlew » 19 Feb 2012 22:55
Well this is the first time I've actually like... Mixed a song.
Its guitar, piano, and me singing.. All written by me xP
Nothing all that fancy butttt it's something.
Sorry it's a bit depressing. It's been a bit of an off week for me and I guess this is what came from it.
Well here is the track:
http://db.tt/175ZmmJv
And here it is again but without the vocal edit and with the vocals being louder:
http://db.tt/tPZ0pPex
And here are the lyrics:
[i]Tears are louder than silence.
It's a fact I've found too true.
To escape the world and hide away
A sane person would not do.
Marched through mountains unstained
Swooned in the presence of man
Broken through waves of resistance
Crashed into the wall of your plan.
Alone I'm more than enough
Savior within my own light
No distractions from living till my dying day
In my own head I'll make it through the night.
Or maybe I'll find a way out
To disappear from the eyes of doubt
To be gone from this world
Alone I may just die.
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AerieFlew on 20 Feb 2012 09:31, edited 1 time in total.
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by MasterOfRegret » 20 Feb 2012 03:13
I think that the effects on your voice make it quite hard to understand you.
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by AerieFlew » 20 Feb 2012 09:31
Thank you MasterOfRegret. I just posted another version without it. Tell me if it improved any please.
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by bigBerd » 21 Feb 2012 22:45
Yeah, sounds a LOT better without the effects. Your voice really fits the rest of the track by itself.
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by AerieFlew » 22 Feb 2012 06:48
Ah all right. Thank you.
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