<Original><BP-WIP> Getting back in the groove.

[Navron]

So after many started projects with no success, I finally decided I'll do my BP submission with real instruments. I'm looking for some feedback on how this song is arranged so far.

- Heavy enough? (Note the bass hasn't been recorded yet.)
- Do the vocals work?
- How about the riffs?

Just some basic feedback really. I'd love to create a heavy metal song for BP, so please let me know how to fix this up.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/52284231/Balloo ... %20WIP.mp3

Note I will be away til next Friday, but I hope to come back and finish this up and get a teaser made.

[InC]

Well, I'd say that the verse vocals may need to be turned up a bit, but other than that, they definitely work well and I'm liking the song so far. Sorry I can't give more feedback, but it's already sounding pretty good !