<original><pony> Sleep

[Unknownponyy]

So, what are your thoughts on it?

[DrSorkenstein]

It captures the sense of dreaming really well, like several different nightmare unrelated to one another passing you by. Unique and interesting! (The beepy synth near the end made me think of an alarm clock going of at first)

Oh! and welcome btw!

[Unknownponyy]

Thank you a lot! Any things I should fix for my next song?

[randomblockfilms]

sound really good! kind of a bit of industrial in there! (i think) lol

for some critizism, i think you could use some more instruments so that it doesn't sound like background music. This i think is probably the biggest problem that brony musicians, in fact all musicians face. (well maybe not the biggest problem but this certainly isn't easy to overcome) even i struggle with this.

but play around and listen to what other people do i their songs so that one day you may use those same techniques in your musics!

[Unknownponyy]

for some critizism, i think you could use some more instruments so that it doesn't sound like background music.

Thank you, I just download some new sound files to use so my next song should have that problem covered, anything else?

[Freewave]

i'm not wild about that starting synth (not the light pad, the one that kinda goes "wow"). some complexity and deviation would be nice. it's going to be a borderline ambient track if you really don't have a pronounced beat which is this missing. Up to you if that's intended or not

[AerieFlew]

I like that I think of idea bouncing when I hear this. Maybe a little more... Structure? It's well done but not all if it fits and it kinda seems like a lot of ideas out together which can work but it's not all fluid. There should be SOMETHING that makes it flow a bit better. Great job over all though! I love the concept <3