<WIP>Wintergreen - Organized Chaos

[Wintergreen]

Hey, I've been working on this song the past 2 days, and I think I've hit a bit of a roadblock. I'd love some ideas of maybe where to put some audio clips perhaps, or if a sound level is off, or something. I'm not sure how readable this is, since I am so very tired. Sorry if this is in the wrong place, but I'm still pretty new here.

tl;dr, tell me what's wrong with it.

http://soundcloud.com/paul-denson/adagiowip4

[DrSorkenstein]

0:30 to 1:00 should build up a bit more to the next section at 1:00. Reverse FX and ambiance can spice this up. Also you need more melodies to tie it all together, perhaps slicing up some vocal samples could be the trick although I really think some singing and lyrics would lift this track enormously.

[Wintergreen]

Hmm...never really done any work with singing, just the odd voice sample, but I guess I could give it at least a try!

[DrSorkenstein]

Neither have I Go nuts!