<WIP> A little demo, needs feedback! :D

[Mazzive]

Hello everypony!

I just made this demo today, it's called "You're going to love me" i tried to "remix" one of fluttershy's songs. It's my first time that i've tried to remix something. I tried to hear it with both headphones and a stereo. And i must say, please, don't hear it with headphones, it sounds terrible.
But yeah, i just need some feedback, but remember, i made this on a day, it was just something i made really quick.

Peace!
Mazzive.
http://soundcloud.com/mazzive-2/mazzive-youre-going-to-love-me

[Facade]

needs vocals maybe make the bass a little crunchier you also need some subb bass
overall pretty good!

[Mazzive]

needs vocals maybe make the bass a little crunchier you also need some subb bass
overall pretty good!

Thank you, i forgot to mention that i started to producing music about in the start of Janaury, so i'm actually a noob. But hey, is there some tutorials you can recommed for me. Until now i saw some videos, where this guy show the basic in FL Studio called "Beginner to pro". They are like 25-40 min long each video. I also watched tutorials for Massive for things like wobbles, yoi and so on.
But yea, is there any tutorials you can recommed for me?

[bigBerd]

Overall it's a bit repetitive, but I must say I love the vocal samples. And you're right about the headphones thing. Ouch.

[Freewave]

what speed is this? its kind of got a weird feel of jumping back and forth between dubstep and eventually into hardstyle. the hardstyle is decent if a bit plain (and the drums are not heavy). its got potential but you need some hooks and a way to make more sense of it.

[Mazzive]

what speed is this? its kind of got a weird feel of jumping back and forth between dubstep and eventually into hardstyle. the hardstyle is decent if a bit plain (and the drums are not heavy). its got potential but you need some hooks and a way to make more sense of it.

I really don't know, i will guess at 140 bpm. But yeah, i know this "demo" was weird as shit, i just uploaded a V2 of it. Check it out.

[Lyonize]

The 2nd version is definitely better! Though the short silences are a little awkward. Short instances of silence can work but just not this time i don't think. Good job! =D

[Mazzive]

The 2nd version is definitely better! Though the short silences are a little awkward. Short instances of silence can work but just not this time i don't think. Good job! =D

Thank you, every single persons tips means alot for me. Thank you!