royalpony5300- keep on buckin rawstyle

[royalpony5300]

ok so ive hope you heard of hardstyle hardcore or rawstyle. anyway heres one of my latest rawstyle tracks. this took me almost 5, 6 hrs to make and build. anyway enjoy. link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2iA0tkepgEg

[PrincessAddictia]

sorry man, but ripping of the melody from frequenzers - revolution is really not ok.
Some technical criticism:
Your synth are too dry. You can fix that with reverb and delay.
The screeches were to chaotic. They need more structure and catchyness to keep the listener interested.
For your kick I would recommend watching this tutorial http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aGBN96FVt2k

But most important, don't steal stuff from others and create your own music.

[royalpony5300]

@PrincessAddictia ay brony thanxs ill keep that in mind. but i didnt know this was frequenzers- revolution melodie. some friend of mine sent this melodie to me and it didnt came with the name of the melodie. but it didnt know who it was so i use it cuz i sounded great for a raw style. but i always make my melodies. and if i fell like using someone ells es melodie ill use them. i rarely dony use others melodies. but ya sorry but i didnt know that this melodie belonged to frequenzers- revolution.

[PrincessAddictia]

Maybe you should look a bit closer at the melodies this "friend" sends to you (I listened to your other tracks on youtube and there were some more melodies from big producers), and if you want to use a melody that exists in another track make it a remix or atleast link to the original in the video-description. I don't want to offend you or something, I just think it's important to give credit to the producer(s) who came up with the melody.