<pony> Out of Cider.

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<pony> Out of Cider.

Postby soup2504 » 04 Feb 2012 12:23

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Re: <pony> Out of Cider.

Postby Freewave » 04 Feb 2012 16:46

but i kinda like this!! ;<

you made it why don't you like your own track? its ok to have music with a bit of humor in it.
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Re: <pony> Out of Cider.

Postby soup2504 » 04 Feb 2012 17:30

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Re: <pony> Out of Cider.

Postby MYCUTIEMARKISAGUN » 04 Feb 2012 22:43

I like it more than the vast majority of electronic brony music.
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Re: <pony> Out of Cider.

Postby soup2504 » 05 Feb 2012 14:36

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Re: <pony> Out of Cider.

Postby randomblockfilms » 05 Feb 2012 16:34

now maybe the instruments might sound a bit week, but the notes that you have there are very good. well to me at least. :P maybe with some mastering and fine tuning, you could really make this song pop!

and Cheerilee looks funneh. lol
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Re: <pony> Out of Cider.

Postby soup2504 » 06 Feb 2012 14:33

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Re: <pony> Out of Cider.

Postby Senjan » 06 Feb 2012 16:15

If this is a troll song, then I would love to hear one of your "serious" songs when you decide to compose more! :)

I actually really like it! The main melody and the percussion blends well together.
I noticed though that the "Cider! Cider!" part towards the end was a bit out of sync. I'd suggest you try and splice around the soundclips in the future, so that they work better with the rhytm of the song. You might also want to avoid using clips with background music, as they can easily turn the song into chaos with the mixing chords and melody etc.

Other than that, keep it up! Superior to my own first song, guaranteed. (And I was serious) ;)
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Re: <pony> Out of Cider.

Postby soup2504 » 06 Feb 2012 21:16

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Re: <pony> Out of Cider.

Postby Kryptage » 06 Feb 2012 21:30

soup2504 wrote:but after hearing it 200 times while editing, I kinda got tired of it. Buuuuuut I'm glad someone liked it.


That is the effect of music production my friend. Normally by the time I'm done with my songs, I don't think its possible people will like them, cause they sound so boring to me.

I liked this piece though! It could be a little more interesting musically. As in, more chord changing, more dynamics and such. It also doesn't sound like some of the sound clips are in key, but that might just be me.

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Re: <pony> Out of Cider.

Postby MYCUTIEMARKISAGUN » 06 Feb 2012 22:50

soup2504 wrote:I find that a little hard to believe


Now you know how I feel when a brony makes a rap song (with an off-beat ass flow lol) and ppl flood the video w/ comments like "THIS IS THE BEST RAP SONG I'VE EVER HEARD, WOW!!!!" :lol:

but yea fwiw this reminds me of those old late 80s/early 90s house/freestyle/breakbeat/eurodance/whatever songs my dad's radio station used to play back when i was a Ninja Turtles fan

Kryptage wrote:That is the effect of music production my friend. Normally by the time I'm done with my songs, I don't think its possible people will like them, cause they sound so boring to me.


strange, I only feel that way when I'm recording a actual song w/ someone. Eventually by the end of the night I feel so exhausted, I just wanna burn the song and get the fuck outta there. Its the opposite with my beats. I used to rock out to some hot ish I just made for HOURS.*

* - like, for example that Silvahound remix blasting in my eardrums right now, MEIN GOTT
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Re: <pony> Out of Cider.

Postby soup2504 » 06 Feb 2012 23:16

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Re: <pony> Out of Cider.

Postby MYCUTIEMARKISAGUN » 06 Feb 2012 23:20

soup2504 wrote:
MYCUTIEMARKISAGUN wrote:* - like, for example that Silvahound remix blasting in my eardrums right now, MEIN GOTT


Anything relevant to Silva Hound in any way is worth blasting in your eardrums for months on end. Bought every single song by him, still listen to them today. If you haven't checked, go to his soundcloud and listen to his remix of "You and me".

All I will say is that the song made my face go pale for a little bit at one point.


yep, and actually i was talking about the remix i just posted (CHEAP PLUG)

needless to say, i'll be combing through the rest of his catalog later
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Re: <pony> Out of Cider.

Postby TheSunAndTheRainfall » 06 Feb 2012 23:50

Actually, I think the general idea is pretty neat. The background from the Flim Flam Brothers vocals sticks out a little too much, but otherwise it's pretty great as a first attempt. Also whoa, sudden wubbage at the end. Me gusta.
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