So I debuted this song last Toastbeard, and I already vented a good part of my frustrations and insecurities regarding this song over there and on the video page, so imma save you guys all that (or most of it, at least) and just say that I'm not happy with this, and that I feel super lousy because I worked super hard on it, and built it up in my head little by little since December, or earlier, and I almost went nuts a few times while making it, but I still couldn't get it right. :c The only reason why I'm releasing it is because I'd probably feel even lousier if I just put it away, and I didn't want to leave it alone for a while and then return to it because whenever I leave something unfinished, it stays in the back of my mind all the time, and haunts me to the point where I lose sleep over it.
I guess I'm just relieved because I'm finally getting rid of it. Anyhow, I'd really appreciate any opinions on where I went wrong (I know I messed up the vocals), and any input on how this can be improved. I probably won't go back and fix this song (mostly because my computer would crash if I move anything), but it'll help me learn from my mistakes and not repeat them.
Thanks for listening, and thanks to everyone on IRC for your kind words. c: